Purplecharmanderz wrote:Definitely some decent ideas here. Biggest thing I may criticize here is the talon slime's feralling aspect. While as it is worded it would be hunger linked rather than agitation (although I suspect agitation would have been intended here if you meant it to be like the hunter largo.) It is near identical to the key feature of hunter largos that actually make them unique, outside of graphically appearing to turn invisible. Given each slime has it's own unique quirk that makes it stand out from the others (tabby being just plain compared to the other feline slimes, rocks rolling far more than Crystals and so forth.) With related slimes sharing similar properties, just seems to go against this to have a bird like slime share a property, and a unique one at that, with a feline slime.
SaltbrushC wrote:Purplecharmanderz wrote:Definitely some decent ideas here. Biggest thing I may criticize here is the talon slime's feralling aspect. While as it is worded it would be hunger linked rather than agitation (although I suspect agitation would have been intended here if you meant it to be like the hunter largo.) It is near identical to the key feature of hunter largos that actually make them unique, outside of graphically appearing to turn invisible. Given each slime has it's own unique quirk that makes it stand out from the others (tabby being just plain compared to the other feline slimes, rocks rolling far more than Crystals and so forth.) With related slimes sharing similar properties, just seems to go against this to have a bird like slime share a property, and a unique one at that, with a feline slime.
Rather than going feral, I say the talon slimes would actively attempt to fly out of their corral and escape to the nearest food source. This would lead to utter chaos with no-longer-hungry talon slimes not going back to their corrals, perhaps ending up in other corrals and eating plorts, or having their own plorts eaten easily. A suitable challenge for an experienced Beatrix.
Purplecharmanderz wrote:SaltbrushC wrote:Purplecharmanderz wrote:Definitely some decent ideas here. Biggest thing I may criticize here is the talon slime's feralling aspect. While as it is worded it would be hunger linked rather than agitation (although I suspect agitation would have been intended here if you meant it to be like the hunter largo.) It is near identical to the key feature of hunter largos that actually make them unique, outside of graphically appearing to turn invisible. Given each slime has it's own unique quirk that makes it stand out from the others (tabby being just plain compared to the other feline slimes, rocks rolling far more than Crystals and so forth.) With related slimes sharing similar properties, just seems to go against this to have a bird like slime share a property, and a unique one at that, with a feline slime.
Rather than going feral, I say the talon slimes would actively attempt to fly out of their corral and escape to the nearest food source. This would lead to utter chaos with no-longer-hungry talon slimes not going back to their corrals, perhaps ending up in other corrals and eating plorts, or having their own plorts eaten easily. A suitable challenge for an experienced Beatrix.
Ok, because the OP literally says turn feral when hungry. Definitely a fair alternative, but yeah.
SaltbrushC wrote:Purplecharmanderz wrote:SaltbrushC wrote:Purplecharmanderz wrote:Definitely some decent ideas here. Biggest thing I may criticize here is the talon slime's feralling aspect. While as it is worded it would be hunger linked rather than agitation (although I suspect agitation would have been intended here if you meant it to be like the hunter largo.) It is near identical to the key feature of hunter largos that actually make them unique, outside of graphically appearing to turn invisible. Given each slime has it's own unique quirk that makes it stand out from the others (tabby being just plain compared to the other feline slimes, rocks rolling far more than Crystals and so forth.) With related slimes sharing similar properties, just seems to go against this to have a bird like slime share a property, and a unique one at that, with a feline slime.
Rather than going feral, I say the talon slimes would actively attempt to fly out of their corral and escape to the nearest food source. This would lead to utter chaos with no-longer-hungry talon slimes not going back to their corrals, perhaps ending up in other corrals and eating plorts, or having their own plorts eaten easily. A suitable challenge for an experienced Beatrix.
Ok, because the OP literally says turn feral when hungry. Definitely a fair alternative, but yeah.
Um, I am the OP.
Purplecharmanderz wrote:SaltbrushC wrote:Purplecharmanderz wrote:SaltbrushC wrote:Purplecharmanderz wrote:Definitely some decent ideas here. Biggest thing I may criticize here is the talon slime's feralling aspect. While as it is worded it would be hunger linked rather than agitation (although I suspect agitation would have been intended here if you meant it to be like the hunter largo.) It is near identical to the key feature of hunter largos that actually make them unique, outside of graphically appearing to turn invisible. Given each slime has it's own unique quirk that makes it stand out from the others (tabby being just plain compared to the other feline slimes, rocks rolling far more than Crystals and so forth.) With related slimes sharing similar properties, just seems to go against this to have a bird like slime share a property, and a unique one at that, with a feline slime.
Rather than going feral, I say the talon slimes would actively attempt to fly out of their corral and escape to the nearest food source. This would lead to utter chaos with no-longer-hungry talon slimes not going back to their corrals, perhaps ending up in other corrals and eating plorts, or having their own plorts eaten easily. A suitable challenge for an experienced Beatrix.
Ok, because the OP literally says turn feral when hungry. Definitely a fair alternative, but yeah.
Um, I am the OP.
OP tends to mean either original post or original poster, this case I meant original post (which literally stated the largos turn feral when hungry) which I had been responding to. I realized you were the original poster, and wanted to make sure it was clear that had been stated in the original post. Have had enough people get ticked off at me because i can't read their minds when they change what they are thinking, and it wasn't entirely clear if you were implying that had been your original intent (which then would be a reason for me to quote your original post) or if it was a change that came about later (to which it wouldn't matter if I did point out where I was coming from there or not.)
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