In a few short minutes the shuttle landed in front of a large, two story dome-like building, a large flat portion of land stretched in every direction from the shuttle granting it all the room it needed as it proceeded through the unloading process and waking the passenger.
In a few short minutes the shuttle landed in front of a large, two story dome-like building, a large flat portion of land stretching in every direction from the shuttle to grant it all the room it needed as it proceeded through the unloading process and waking the passenger.
As the shuttle unloaded its only passenger a ball of fire streaked across the sky, many slimes slid and bounded for cover at the sight of the fiery formation streaking across the sky.
As the shuttle unloaded its only passenger, a ball of fire streaked across the sky, many slimes sliding and bounding for cover at the sight.
Moments later, the meteor disappeared beyond the rock formations that made up the biome known as the indigo quarry...
makes your wording sound far more convincing and realistic.Moments later, the meteor disappeared beyond the rock formations that made up the Indigo Quarry...
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Connor began to stir within his room. Connor, after a few moments of hesitation...
Connor began to stir within his room. After a few moments of hesitation, he...
Connor quickly changed out of his pyjamas and into the clothes he just grabbed...
Largos hopped around freely since there were no corral barriers to contain them, a rogue pink plort sat alone near one of the carrot plots.
a rogue pink plort sitting alone near one of the carrot plots.
...crystal spikes growing more prominent, and rolled straight towards the odd onion, and the plort.
...crystal spikes growing more and more prominent, and plummeted straight towards the odd onion, and - by extension - the plort.
...his dash boots out of energy...
As the air around the plort got pulled towards the vac-pack...
As the air around the plort [insertHere] towards the vac-pack, the largo barrelled into the plort.
The air around the plort [insertHere]ing towards the vac-pack, the largo barrelled into the plort with tremendous velocity.
Uncurling from its ball, the largo opened its mouth and wrapped it's congealed lips around the solid mass of pink gelatine, the conversion started and ended almost instantly, the largo's spiked form collapsed into a softer black tar like mass.
Uncurling from its ball, the largo opened its mouth and wrapped its congealed lips around the solid mass of pink gelatine, the conversion starting and ending almost instantly, the largo's spiked form collapsing into a softer black tar like mass.
...the foul tarr.
The first few globes missed their mark, not seeing the threat the tarr began leaping towards the nearest source of nourishment, Connor himself, right into the next few globs of water.
The first few globes missed their mark, and not seeing the threat the tarr leapt towards the nearest source of nourishment - Connor himself - right into the next few globules of water.
as the black substance began to separate as the water bonded to its form and scattered it in a flash of vibrant colours.
, the black substance beginning to separate as the water bonded to its form and scattered it in a flash of vibrant colours.
Connor dropped to his knees and sighed, this was the thirteenth largo lost to Tarr formation this week.
In due time the ranch was at least functional for a few days of no supervision, Connor stepped into his house to grab a box which he strapped to the side of his vac-pack and returned outside.
He was planning to discover all the secrets he could there, now armed with a lunch kit and his grandfather's old vac-pack filled to 30 globes of water at the ready, Connor was ready to head out onto the range.
...blue haired, spunky teenage girl..
...wrangled not too far East of Connor's ranch, where the girl stepped out of her ranch to find a decent sized clearing home to many pinks, Connor found a rocky plateau filled with small volcanic crags, housing many rock and crystal slimes.
Since he broke his dash boots' shock absorbers shortly after arriving at the ranch...
Double points if you can somehow figure out a synonym for broken.Since he had broken his dash boots' shock absorbers shortly after arriving at the ranch...
The moss blanket was something truly marvelous, the high growing trees grew their leaves in such a fashion to allow the sun high above to shower the ground in golden light to make it appear like a night sky at your feet.
The moss blanket was truly marvelous, the high growing trees growing their leaves in such a fashion to allow the sun high above to shower the ground in golden light to make it appear like a night sky at Connor's feet.
...eating a bit of the lunch he packed for the journey, or at least that was his original intention before a tabby dropped a freshly picked cuberry at his feet.
...embedded into the walls, the entrance room wasn't the largest space, measuring only about seven feet wide and about the same dimensions tall.
The chamber wasn't large, but showed signs of something living in it, vines and mosses lined the base of the walls, scorch marks ran across the walls of the den and lying in the center were some strange rings, quite similar to the teleporters that the blue haired teen had on her ranch.
The chamber wasn't large, but showed signs of something living in it, vines and mosses lining the base of the walls, scorch marks running across the walls of the den and lying in the center some strange rings, quite similar to the teleporters that the blue haired teen had on her ranch.
The writing itself was not something Connor could understand though, finding this more than curious, Connor was about to take a step forward when the blue and yellow flash shot again between his legs, leaving a scorching trail in its wake.
The writing itself was not something Connor could understand - though he found it more than curious. Connor was about to take a step forward when the blue and yellow flash shot again between his legs, leaving a scorching trail in its wake.
(because how could he have known that a plort was released within the tunnels the slime escaped through, and got caught in a statue to power the teleporter.)
- because, after all, how could he have known that a plort released within the tunnels had begun to power the teleporter?
, before Connor could even process what was happening lightning struck the roof of the temple.
...the rings at Connor's feet beginning to spin faster and emit a blue glow, and another bolt of lightning struck the roof of the structure...
Connor's mind was racing, unsure on how to respond, Connor..
TheGreciansHousehold wrote:Commas should not be used to start new sentences; periods should be used instead.
Connor found himself surrounded by a bunch of scrap metal.
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