Heather wrote:Welcome to our community Silvie!
Thanks for sharing your artwork with us, my favorite one was your take on the Tarr.
Keep them coming!
ArtsyTroll wrote:!!! YES I APPROVE OF ALL OF THESE!!
I'm loving that Tarr design! I've been thinking of doing Gijinkas too, but yours are basically what mine would have been!
I haven't been on deviantART in forever [do I even have my account anymore?] but I need to watch you or something. Note to self: Draw fanart of that freakin' Tarr!!
ArtsyTroll wrote:Ask and you shall receive, my friend!~ I'll be doing these in threes, so tomorrow I'll have the next three done!~ :3
Kaite20 wrote:Not bad, though the designs have room for improvement. I think the Rock Slimes should wear spiky armor, for example, and the puddle design needs a bit more tweaking. Also, I think they should look androgynous, or at least have very small differences between the genders.
Critiques:
Pink Slime: This one is near perfect. The clothes just need to be a bit more loose, and they're good to go!
Rock Slime: I think rock-based armor would be better in terms of clothing. Their current clothing is a little bland, I think. Also, the hair should be spiky.
Tabby Slime: The hair should be messy, and the clothes should be more fluffy and furry instead of using the Schoolgirl outfit.
Phosphor Slime: Separate the dress into two pieces; make the top yellow, and the bottom the dark purple. I love the idea of them being fairies!
Puddle slime: Change them from mermaids to being based off of water spirits, and make the clothing loose, like silk. After all, Puddle Slimes can wander on land for a short period before disappearing.
Honey Slime: Make the clothes a bit loose like I mentioned with the puddle slime above.
Boom Slime: I'd say this one is pretty close to perfect in my opinion, but a bit of char marks on the outfit wouldn't hurt!
Rad Slime: Make the clothes more futuristic-looking, like making it a bodysuit.
Gold Slime: Add jewelry, make the clothes more shiny and glitzy, and give them idiot hair.
Tarr: Maybe add a second pair of arms as well? Also, make the clothes much more tattered, and give them more tattoos.
I hope this helps!
SilvieSkydancer wrote:
I object to a couple of these specifically because of my design choices:
TABBY - My idea for the Tabby slime was "100% weaboo trash".
RAD - Wanted them to look mutated.
A lot of these other suggestions are nice though. I like to keep my character designs simple, though, so I probably won't change them much- I'm satisfied with them, anyway.
If anyone else wants to try making gijinkas, by all means, go for it. I'd love to see what other people come up with.
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