The ash desert and smoke slime!

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The ash desert and smoke slime!

Postby Slimeyfan » Tue Oct 24, 2017 12:07 am

Smoke slime: open the windows.

Diet:meat

Fav. Food:smokey hen.


Plort value:78

Slimeology: smoke slimes are light as a feather
It creates tornados like the dervish slime
it could be your pet but it creates too
Much smoke! You have to get the
Air vent upgrade for the corral.
Even the smoke slime needs fresh air

Rancher risks: they pose no serious threat
But the smoke can harm you so don't
Stay in there to long.

Plortonomics: smoke plorts are used in
Movies used to test smoke detecters
They even made paint called
Smoke slime gray!

Smokey hen: nice and smokey!

Type: meat

Favored. By: smoke slime.

The pyro hens distant relative the,smokey hen
Is believed to come from a fire slimes fire
We don't know how it happens but thing we know for
Sure they are smokey!

Smokey chickadoo: this chick has a smokey future.

Type: future meat.

Favored.by: none.

The Ash desert:the remains of a beautiful forest.

What used to be a forest is now ash
There are few ponds there.
Very few trees are found.
Nobody knows what happened
But you can bring it back.

Burnt bananas:has a bit of,charr.

Type: fruit.

Favored.by: char slime

Despite there ruff apprance
They are very sweet!

Char slime:these guys are hard as rock!

Diet: fruit.

Fav. Food: burnt bananas.

Plort value: 112

Slimeology: the char slime is the most common slime
In the Ash desert they are very easy to ranch
Eating those burnt bananas made them a softy!

Rancher. Risks: if they eat a plort
They instantly turn in to charr!

They can break through walls!
You have to get the stronger walls upgrade.

Plortonamics:char plorts are used for
Charcoal and cannonballs!
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Re: Smoke slime

Postby TheGreciansHousehold » Tue Oct 24, 2017 12:09 am

Would you mind posting more next itme?
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Re: Smoke slime

Postby Slimeyfan » Tue Oct 24, 2017 12:49 am

I was updating it
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Re: The ash desert and smoke slime!

Postby Randomtangle » Tue Oct 24, 2017 4:37 am

Where is it? can it be by the Indigo Quarry?
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Re: The ash desert and smoke slime!

Postby Crafter1300 » Tue Oct 24, 2017 6:03 am

Nice and creative idea
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Re: The ash desert and smoke slime!

Postby Randomtangle » Tue Oct 24, 2017 9:24 am

I should know creative. I give two thumbs up. (sorry, no more thumbs)
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Re: The ash desert and smoke slime!

Postby Slimeyfan » Tue Oct 24, 2017 12:39 pm

It's in ash desert
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Re: The ash desert and smoke slime!

Postby EmeraldPlay » Tue Oct 24, 2017 1:17 pm

Nice idea, but I think that the Char Slime's plort value should be way lower. It's too high for something that can be so easily made riskless.
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Re: The ash desert and smoke slime!

Postby Randomtangle » Tue Oct 24, 2017 1:38 pm

Yeah, maybe it could be harder to ranch.
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Re: The ash desert and smoke slime!

Postby Slimeyfan » Tue Oct 24, 2017 1:41 pm

Ok make sure to read it after I update it
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Re: The ash desert and smoke slime!

Postby Randomtangle » Tue Oct 24, 2017 1:50 pm

did you update it?
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Re: The ash desert and smoke slime!

Postby Slimeyfan » Tue Oct 24, 2017 1:53 pm

Done!
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Re: The ash desert and smoke slime!

Postby Randomtangle » Tue Oct 24, 2017 2:06 pm

maybe not that hard.
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Re: The ash desert and smoke slime!

Postby MisfortuneRising » Wed Oct 25, 2017 3:06 pm

Really good ideas! But I just want to point some things out:

Number 1, we already have a desert zone in the game.

Number 2, lower the value of the Char Slime's plort or make the Char Slime more annoying/difficult to ranch. Having an easy slime to ranch and a default plort value that high is way too overpowered.

Number 3, if a forest, or a rain forest, or a jungle burns down, it doesn't immediately turn into a desert. It turns into a barren stretch of land. The only difference is that there are no trees or any other type of vegetation, or animals, or water sources. It's not like a forest is gonna burn down and then sand dunes, pyramids, and sand is just gonna pop out of nowhere.

Number 4, saying that the Char Slime turns into a Charr when it eats any kind of plort makes absolutely no sense. Why would the Char Slime turn into itself? Unless the Charr is supposed to be the sibling of the Tarr.

Number 5, you say that the Smoke Slime poses no serious threat to a rancher, yet the smoke that it produces CAN harm you. Taking damage from a slime is a serious threat. That makes no sense.

Number 6, when you say that you can "bring it back", that means that you're referring to bringing life back to the Ash Desert just like the Glass Desert. I don't think it would be a good idea to have the same mechanic used in multiple zones.

Final thing: I would suggest changing the name of the Ash Desert. How about the Ash Canyons?

Not trying to rain on your parade or anything. These are really cool ideas! They just need some work. That's all.
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Re: The ash desert and smoke slime!

Postby Randomtangle » Wed Oct 25, 2017 6:20 pm

Nice comments! I think you could plant a tree, and then an oasis-like thing would pop up.
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