Seibo wrote:OreRancher wrote:Have you thought of how overpowered and unoriginal your/yous sister's slimes are? I'm not trying to be rude, but please think twice before posting a slime topic. Plus, this slime could've had a more creatove name, like lunar slime.
It doesn't matter if you're "trying not to be," you're acting very rude. Also the plort design is super cool!
This may be because I'm a staffer on a creative writing site, but no, this is not "rude." It's basic criticism, and it's valid. Telling someone "good job" regardless to of the actual quality of their work doesn't help anybody. If anything, it's a detriment to the OP(s), because they will never improve themselves.
I'm going to be quite frank here, these ideas aren't the best. They are indeed overpowered. They're often the slime-versions of a Mary Sue, if I'm gonna be honest. Super rare, their plorts are worth an excessive amount of NBs, often eat other slimes (which I find to be a bad and uncharacteristic idea in the first place), and are either very, very exploitable, or just plain unnecessary.
Overall, it feels like the OPs are just shotgunning and throwing things at the wall to see if anything sticks.